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Yesterday afternoon I happened see a touching event in Hongxing Park.Some people were boating on the lake，among whom were perhaps a happy family.They were taking photos when the girl fell off from the boat into the water.Then came a cry of "help!help!" Obviously，they can not swim at all.On hearing the help，a young man rushed towards a lake quickly.Without any hesitation，she jumped into the lake but swam to the drowning girl.Eventually，the girl was saving by the young man.How happily the people were!But the brave young man disappeared before the parent could thank him.
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