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Ladies and gentleman，Thank you for coming today to attend the graduation ceremony at No.3 Senior High School.Firstly of all，I'd like to congratulate all the students who are here today.I remember meet all of you when you were just started Grade 7 at this school.You were all so full of energy and thirst for knowledge.And yes，some of you were a little difficult to deal !But today I see a room full of talented young adults who is full of hope in the future.I hope you'll remember the important people in your lives who helped and support you- your parents，your teachers，your classmate and your friends.Please consider how they've done for you and what they mean for you.Lastly，the end of junior high school is the beginning of a new life.You'll make mistake along the way，but the key is to learn from your mistakes and never give up.But along with difficulties，there will also be many excited things wait for you.Behind each door you open is chances to learning new things，and you have the ability to make your own choices.Choose wise and be responsible for your decisions and actions.Although you have to go your separate ways now，but I wish that in a few years' time，you'll come back to visit our school.
As you set out on our new journey，you shouldn't forget where you came from.The future is your.Good luck and hope to see you again sometimes soon!
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