假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
When my twentieth birthday came，I was not out home．In order to celebrate so an important day with my parent，I wrote them a letter．In the letter I thanked them for have raised me for twenty years，and express my love for them．Later my mother told me she read the letter，tears filled with her eyes．But my father appeared much cooler．He read it alone carefully， but then he put it away．I can imagine the scene clear because I know my father very much．Be a man with few words，he prefers to show his love for me in silent way．
【考點】人與自我．
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