假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
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注意：
（1）每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞。
（2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
?"Together for a Shared Future" is the theme that gained popularity since 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games.As a senior student，I dream of being admit to college and long for a happy life in the future.To make our dream a reality，being disciplined are of great importance.For me，doing exercise regular comes first to keep healthy.However，great efforts should be made for further study，through which I will be equipped with knowledges and skills.Lastly，it is through voluntary activities what cooperation and communication will bring out the best in us.I firmly believe in that little action can make the big difference.
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